- Nov 20, 2020
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Updated: Nov 27, 2020
1. Accept the time given to you (whether it's enough or not).
2. Break ideas down.

Those would be the two lessons I learned this week. During the Creative Writing: Renga presentation we had with 9 students. This was conducted as an assessment of in OISE's Adapted Practicum (APP), which groups decided on a topic and taught a lesson for 60 minutes. I along with 3 other classmates developed and implemented this lesson which consisted of GoogleSlide presentation, breakout rooms, and handouts. By the end of the presentation students created a renga poem and collaboratively worked on a blind poem.
I worked on the theoretical aspect in the GoogleSlide; covering the different forms of poetry, the history of renga poems, and reviewing the structure of a Renga poem. Overall, I believe my group did a great job in the presentation both in the science and art of teaching. We were able to finish within the 60 minute time frame, much of the students we're participating, reacted well to the renga activity, and still found it slightly challenging.

Upon hearing the feedback from the students' and with self-reflection I learned a couple of items.
First, accept the time given to you (whether it's enough or not). Reflect and ensure the material shown on the presentation slideshow adhere to the learning goals. With the given timeframe, I was constrained to quickly overview the elements of poetry related to renga poems and its structure. I believe this resulted in some students' feeling it was rushed and with a superficial understanding of the material. This presentation needed more time to overview both areas and more time was needed on the renga structure the students would have had a stronger understanding.
Second, break ideas down. Even when an idea or material is broken down and clarified, break it down a bit more just in case. When explaining the renga structure during the break rooms I felt that I explained the 5-7-5, 7-7 syllable stanza structure, but I repeated myself a few times. I understand that clearer instructions were needed and recording this information on the handout or a whiteboard would have been an effective means for students to reference. This way students can look back just if material is still fresh.
Attached are the lesson plan and handout I created with my group members.


